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QUESTIONABLE THOUGHTS
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QUESTIONABLE THOUGHTS |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
QUESTIONABLE THOUGHTS Left me in a state of dismay My thoughts were all a lie Questions that I thought were awnsered Remain encased inside I felt something that wasn’t returned And it eats me alive While IM powerless to do anything When anything is all I want But am I falling into that trap Where I look instead of find? Will it haunt me all my life? Or can I control my state of mind? Do I need you?, Did I want you? My mind can’t decide But it starts to get clearer in my head Clearer that now is not my time! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The art of poetry is defining questons such as these. Great work. Eric |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
its nice, isn't it? how poetry helps us think through things. Or rather, come to grips with what we know. Strong, good write. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Barbara Trautman Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 90 |
Hard questions to answer. Nice poem, though. Keep writing and the answer may become clear. Don't stop now. Barb |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
keep on writing! love it! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Questions that only time can answer... I surely hope you find yours...  |
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