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Sun of faith
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0 posted 2003-02-08 09:26 PM



Is it too early?
Because surely its not too late
Reasons for my thoughts
Only I will truly understand
But should I let these reasons go?
And throw them all away
Or stick by my decisions
Let them all stay
Hour of judgement closes in
Blurred vision deepens
Not knowing what comes next
My questions remain unawnsered
But whichever way I go
I know I’ll be right
The path I choose to take
Will be the correct one

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Jaime
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1 posted 2003-02-08 10:05 PM


It's so hard for me to make up my mind sometimes... it's never a matter of not having options, but rather the issue of having too many.

I agree that the end result tends to be the best, simply because I don't believe in mistakes. I think that the things we call mistakes are some of the best choices we make (but only when something is learned).

Good poem. I like how you seem to be picking through your thoughts in this.. like you're talking to yourself and I'm listening in.

- Jaime


a man of quality is not threatened by a woman of equality

[This message has been edited by Jaime (02-08-2003 10:06 PM).]

Ericc
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2 posted 2003-02-08 11:14 PM


Much depth here.
Thank you.
Eric

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-02-09 02:17 AM


I know what you mean...thanks for the write
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