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Aimster
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0 posted 2003-02-08 05:19 PM




When I picture my life and everything good in it, I see the beauty of your face
I'm moved time and time again by the essence of your grace
Love has entered my heart a time or two before
I've wrote poems about how that love made my heart soar

But never have I met someone, who gets to me quite like you do
All I'm left with to say are the words I Love You
When I feel your arms around me, and I'm looking into your eyes
It's as though our souls are joined together in heavenly skies

You are my angel, I feel it everytime you hold my hand
Without any words between us, you just seem to understand

I know that you are scared, and I do feel the same way
Something though tells me that love is here to stay
There's just this sweet innocence about you that matches my own soul
It leaves me feeling like I'm breathing for the first time, for once completely whole

I'm not sure about tomorrow or what the future holds in store for you and me
I just know that with your love in my life, I finally feel free
Though these are just words, they represent the very heart and soul of our love
A love that I know was created by our Father above




"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~


[This message has been edited by Aimster (02-08-2003 05:27 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-08 05:23 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, your beautiful love poetry never ceases to make me smile, sweet friend, I know He created this special love for you and it will always bloom as He wants all to be happy! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, may joy always sing in you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-02-08 05:47 PM


Deep feelings shared beautifully and in gratitude.
Margherita

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3 posted 2003-02-08 06:55 PM


enjoyed
Jaime
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4 posted 2003-02-08 07:48 PM


I hate love poems. I really do because normally they're done very badly (including me, I can't write love poems at all).

I read this though because the first stanza seemed pretty good to me.. and then I read more.. and more.. and before I knew it I read the whole thing. You did this so, so well and it sounded very realistic and sincere. I like how you mentioned fear because that is such a strong force in love (sometimes it gets the best of us).

- Jaime

a man of quality is not threatened by a woman of equality

scorpio
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5 posted 2003-02-08 09:18 PM


I liked the feelings you presented in this poem, Amy..

believe in what your heart feels...

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2003-02-08 09:38 PM


To find someone that matches your soul
is a wonderful feeling.

Your love soars through your poetry.

Good luck to you Amy~

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7 posted 2003-02-08 09:50 PM


This is a very pretty and romantic poem. I
liked it....

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8 posted 2003-02-09 02:41 AM


like it
Kethry
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9 posted 2003-02-09 06:20 AM


Amy,
you have a gift for presenting love in a very real light with all of it's flaws and I am reminded of the words in the Desiderata, "it is still a beautiful world."
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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