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Open Poetry #24

Pain

Teen14
Junior Member

since 2003-01-26

Posts 19

0 posted 2003-02-08 04:01 PM

It hurts when she's not here
Not knowing she's ok
Not knowing if she's made it through the day
It hurts to think what if
But it's hard to stop
I feel the pain as if she's gone forever
God please let her be ok
I don't know what I'd do without her
I'd be an empty shell
Let her be all right
Let me know she'll be ok
She's my light
Don't take it away

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-02-08 04:04 PM

Very nicely done and much enjoyed by this reader.
~Hugs & Smiles~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-02-08 04:24 PM

I feel your pain through your intense words.
Thank you.
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-02-09 02:59 AM

I understand this feeling so well

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