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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-08 03:56 PM



Let each tear
Fall -
They trace a story
Down your cheek.

I read it with a touch.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-08 04:02 PM


Oh....*SIGH*...

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-02-08 04:19 PM


Exquisite! Such sweetness might cause some more tears ... for the pleasure of your touch!
Margherita

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3 posted 2003-02-08 04:38 PM




(sigh) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, I too long so much to cry with my love in joy to touch her heart and know hoe special she is! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-08-2003 04:38 PM).]

carol
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4 posted 2003-02-08 11:25 PM


Ericc,this is very true

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2003-02-09 12:22 PM


Thoughts written in clarity in a few lines inspire me greatly
Very well done
Liz

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6 posted 2003-02-09 12:38 PM


So clear,
So beautiful;
Not just a falling tear,
A touch, a story. Your own words,
So clear....

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7 posted 2003-02-09 01:48 AM


just beautiful, so touching
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8 posted 2003-02-09 02:04 AM


Eric, you are such a good writer. You can say so much
in just a few words......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-02-10 07:22 PM


And that touch reads volumes into the soul... so beautiful.  Gentle intensity in your words.  So very sweet...

Thank you...

Love,
Moca

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