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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-02-09 12:25 PM


How could she have loved him
someone who would dare
to do the things
he did

Such actions that even a stranger
would not have done
against her

How could she have loved him

Someone who was
involved in
such things
Such acts that were unheard of
by her

How could she have loved him
when he hurt her so much
by his actions
against her
and her
child

Yes, just how could I have loved him?



.
.
.
This in no way whatsoever concerns anything about me and Gary. It's about one of the things of my past that I want out of my mind and heart. Thank you all for being patient with me

© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-09 12:27 PM


This is a very good poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-02-09 12:29 PM


Ethel - I can relate to this. I guess that's why some say "love is blind." Well written piece. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-02-09 12:33 PM


I have no answer for you, as I have none for myself in this matter. What I do have to offer is a big cyberhug.

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4 posted 2003-02-09 12:40 PM


Julie....
Thank you friend...
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Chris....
Yes, he disappointed me so much.
Thanks for understanding.....
.
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Kacy....
Thank you for understanding and for the hug.
I needed that....
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With Heart Hugs to you all from

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5 posted 2003-02-09 12:47 PM


yeah....*sigh*
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6 posted 2003-02-09 12:52 PM


very lovely poem ethel
Margherita
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7 posted 2003-02-09 01:49 PM


This is touching. When we open our eyes and magic has gone, we wonder ... sometimes we love too much and tolerate too much in the name of love.
Margherita

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8 posted 2003-02-09 04:41 PM


garysgirl - nice write of before, but is it now?

BC

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9 posted 2003-02-09 05:28 PM


enjoyed
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10 posted 2003-02-09 06:07 PM


Dixie...
Kelly......
Margherita.....
Vandana......
Thank you all very much for reading and replying.
I really appreciate it.
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.
Bill,
no, it has nothing at all to do with now.
Thank you very much for your concern.....
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With love and hugs to you all  

Ethel  

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11 posted 2003-02-09 08:30 PM


Ethel, sometimes they are so charming, you just don't see the real, until it is too late. I am glad you are not going through this now. I hope the memories leave you soon. Hugs my friend.
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12 posted 2003-02-09 09:39 PM


Thank you, Sue......
I really appreciate your comments.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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13 posted 2003-02-09 11:33 PM


Good stuff, Ethel! Keep pouring your guts out and get rid of all the residual pains from the past!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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14 posted 2003-02-09 11:40 PM


keep expressing ethel and pouring out all you need to !
through life we learn from each mistake , we often wonder how many times can a heartbreak
Hope

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15 posted 2003-02-10 12:08 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Ethel, I'm so sorry you went through all of this before, sweet friend, and though my Joanna isn't my true love, I will always love her deep down, just the magic won't be as apparent as before since her feelings for me were untrue! (sad sigh) Angel hugs just for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

shannon harter
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16 posted 2003-02-10 12:17 PM


            


     sadly, i know this all too well. good thing is, its in my past as well. very nice poem.

carol
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17 posted 2003-02-10 01:56 AM


Ethel, i understand, dont know much to say.But I LOVE YOU and i am here

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

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