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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2003-02-08 03:42 PM


I Wish

I wish
to take you dancing
upon a sky so blue
where the only feet
that touched
these clouds
are birds that flew
I wish
to sail in waters
as mystic as the Nile
and place your name
upon the stone
like they did
forever in tile
I wish
to give you
my today
and present
my tomorrow
as your gift
and sail through
air and sea
written forever
as we drift

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2003-02-08 03:54 PM


This poem is a gift itself.
And one to cherish.
Eric

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2 posted 2003-02-08 03:58 PM


Helen, this is beautiful...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2003-02-08 04:09 PM


"I wish to give you my today"
No greater gift was ever bestowed a valentine. This is so lovely
Thank you
Liz

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4 posted 2003-02-08 05:01 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, I would love to swim in the Nile River sometime, it must be so lovely down there, hehehe! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautiful valentine, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-02-09 02:53 AM



S Arthur Grey
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6 posted 2003-02-09 11:05 AM


mmmmmmm
nice
comfy

if i brought my canoe
do you think that would do?

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