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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-08 03:14 PM


She Whispers

be still and listen
she whispers in
the shadows
turn your head
to hear her
her kisses of
the wind

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-02-08 03:17 PM


OneSlickLady~

A W E S O M E  .... simplicity done so elegantly soft~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

1slick_lady
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2 posted 2003-02-08 03:18 PM


marge... thanks...i have missed you sooo much my poets poet...hugs to you...helen
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3 posted 2003-02-08 03:30 PM


Helen, this is beautiful....
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4 posted 2003-02-08 03:41 PM


This is beautiful.
Eric

Wow...I just saw your reply...I am honored.

[This message has been edited by Ericc (02-08-2003 03:45 PM).]

Margherita
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5 posted 2003-02-08 04:17 PM


A lovely whisper carried on soft wings ...
Margherita

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2003-02-08 04:19 PM


This is light and lovely, and romantic
So pleasant to read
Liz

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S Arthur Grey
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8 posted 2003-02-09 03:38 AM


a breeze
soft and warm
brushes lightly
across his cheek
and sighs
in passing

Nan
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9 posted 2003-02-09 07:56 AM


The wind does indeed hold many secrets... Nicely said, H..
zenny
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10 posted 2003-02-09 08:01 AM


just beautiful ... made me reflect on this one

Hugs, kelly

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