Furling Vines (Valentine Poem for Liz's Poem)

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Open Poetry #24

Furling Vines (Valentine Poem for Liz's Poem)

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2003-02-08 01:24 PM

If once to traipse the soft of warming flesh
and grasp the soul in trembling longing sigh.
As whispers fall upon soft ears caress
from nightly dreams of linger moments nigh.

This wine, the sip of which brings forth a yearn
from tendrils green of vine in vintage wait.
A spark of eyes from waited moment’s turn
as lovers touch the threshold’s fated gate.

But for the span of miles to bridge the way
and keep a love from sipping of the vine.
Two minds will dream of yet to be the day
wherein two tongues do whisper Valentine.

As vines do climb into the clouded skies
two leaves shall furl, recalling lover’s sighs.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (02-08-2003 01:25 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-02-08 01:48 PM

one word..Beautiful

M

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

2 posted 2003-02-08 01:50 PM

"As vines do climb into the clouded skies
two leaves shall furl, recalling lover’s sighs"
Beautiful imagery and feelings.
Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-02-08 03:07 PM

*SIGH*

Now that feels better!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

4 posted 2003-02-08 03:21 PM

and you did it sooooo good, Barry!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-02-08 03:28 PM

Barry, this is beautiful....

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2003-02-08 04:28 PM

Magnus, You have taken my breath away with a lover's sigh. How beautifully you compose a sonnet. I wish I could write like this
Thank you
Liz

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-02-08 05:20 PM

(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, so that is why the vines always climb the walls of those marble and alabaster walls, I knew the romance still blooms in the garden of Versailles and the flowerbeds of Florence! (big hugggsssssss) Marvelous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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8 posted 2003-02-09 02:51 AM

whoa...what an ending! what a write!

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