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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-02-08 12:53 PM



Without You
~ By Sue ~

If the day ever comes
I have no thoughts of you
The sadness then will leave
My life will be brand new

It will not be so hard
For me to see the light
Of happiness ahead
The sun will shine real bright

Until that time does come
I will struggle on through
As the days do go by
Here without you

2-8-03


© Copyright 2003 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-02-08 01:12 PM


Ahh the longing ... you express it beautifully!
Margherita

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-02-08 01:36 PM


It will get easier. I know, everyone says that..and I never believed it either..but it does. Nice poem
hugs
M

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-02-08 03:56 PM


Sue, though sad, this is a beautiful poem....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-02-08 04:40 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very sadly touching, sweet friend, I know eventually love will find your way again, you are so deserving of it! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana
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5 posted 2003-02-08 06:57 PM


enjoyed
Aimster
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6 posted 2003-02-08 08:24 PM


sue~
the realistic pain in this hit me
so hard...i hope that if this was
written from real experience, that your
heart begins to mend and you smile once
again. beautiful write.

take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-02-09 02:47 AM


that time will come my friend, hopefully soon
Nan
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8 posted 2003-02-09 07:53 AM


Let's keep the lights on and shining, Sue...
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
9 posted 2003-02-09 08:23 AM


Thank you all for your friendship and support.
poohbear19
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10 posted 2003-02-09 10:15 AM


Well I hope everything works out for you but good poem.

Andrea

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