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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-02-08 12:19 PM



The Fate Of A Bristlecone

Why in the name of science
Would you cut down a tree
Taking its life to count its rings
Only to find out it was one of
Earths oldest living things
Older than the Redwoods, The Sequoias
Older than the Pyramids
She stood for nearly 5,000 years
Once finding that out
Leaving the scientist in tears
The one good thing is
That it wasn't the only tree there
And their location and identity
With no one he shared
The Bristlecone Pine trees
Have another challenge to meet
It is the ever-expanding thing
Called development
Lets slow that down
So they can live
Another 5,000 years

"This we know - the Earth does not belong to man - man belongs to the Earth." Chief Seattle

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-02-08 12:22 PM


sad thing, this thing called "development"
Ericc
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2 posted 2003-02-08 03:59 PM


This is a great lesson....on life and poetry.
Thanks.
Eric

bbent
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3 posted 2003-02-09 05:40 AM


Kind of like killing old nessie to learn what it was,Let's just hope we progress as quickly spiritually and emotionally as we are technically so as to give mother earth the respect she deserves.Enjoyed your write.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Sunnyone
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4 posted 2003-02-09 07:37 AM


Here Here!!!!!  Now, this is a fantastic insight into the stupidity of man.  I am most grateful to have lived in a time when there were still trees, and pray that my descendants will have the same luck as I. But at the rate of progress, I wonder sometimes.  This is a subject close to my heart, and I appreciate your words on it, and how well you wrote this!!

A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!

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5 posted 2003-02-09 01:49 PM


Oh, a heart that beats alongside mine. For years I was an active member of the California Native Plant Society. I understand this poem within my very mind and soul.
I once wrote a short (hopefully humorous) poem "Hiking on my Knees" about hiking with the CNPS members in Malibu and Ventura area canyons, and anywhere else I could get to by boot and backpack.
You bring back good memories, as well as the fights to protect nature's gifts.
I'm keeping this one for sure.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-09-2003 01:50 PM).]

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