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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-02-08 07:53 AM


Tumult

I cooked a little broth this morn
Ate it at the break of dawn.
Watched the cold in amber hew
Set aflame a sky of blue.

Set back in my rocking chair
Let my mind its magic share
Walked the airs kaleidoscope
And said a little prayer of hope.

I often comment just to me
Some of the things that I see
And try to fit them with some wit
A small philosophy of knit

It helps with the things I do
Especially the things with you
It balances the weight of scale
Especially the things I fail.

Each morning brings the same result
The tumult seems less difficult.


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abbe
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1 posted 2003-02-08 08:01 AM


Good morning...

i say you are off to a great start on this day!  

Not a failure here... and i enjoy your "wit" touched philosophies.

Nan
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2 posted 2003-02-08 08:39 AM


Here's hoping we get it right - eventually, yes???... G'Morning, Sy..
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-02-08 08:45 AM


Nan
Get it right or die trying. LOL Good morning


abbe
Good morning and thank you.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-08-2003 08:46 AM).]

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4 posted 2003-02-08 09:09 AM


Much enjoyed your Saturday morning post Sy!
Chai tea this morning....
~Hugs & Smiles~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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5 posted 2003-02-08 09:41 AM


Caught me
Watching like you,
Musing as the sun comes
Over a cool horizon, and...
Rocking.


Thanks for sharing.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-02-08 09:45 AM


"I often comment just to me
Some of the things that I see"


I see you are talking to yourself again...you know what they say

hmmm I actually forgot what they say, a sign of age


M

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2003-02-08 09:46 AM


Good morning
NIce poem to arise to
Thank you for another gift
Liz

Duncan
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8 posted 2003-02-08 10:22 AM


'I often comment just to me
Some of the things that I see
And try to fit them with some wit
A small philosophy of knit

It helps with the things I do
Especially the things with you
It balances the weight of scale
Especially the things I fail.'

Love these verses Sy.  A familiar morning...

SmartChick
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9 posted 2003-02-08 10:41 AM


I never would have thought that you fail at anything. Especially with your poetry. I love to reads your poems. Even though I may not reply very often, I always enjoy reading them.
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-02-08 10:50 AM


Nancy,
Good morning dear tea will be fine.

Ratleader
Nice to have friends, thank you.

Maureen,
Don't think it's age with you. "kiss:

Elizabeth,
Any morning you wake up is a good morning.
Thank you

Top of the morning to you Duncan.


Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-02-08 10:53 AM


SmartChick
It's the same with me, I can't answer all the poem I read. Have a good day.

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12 posted 2003-02-08 10:59 AM


Goodmorning Mr. Seymour...
It's good to see you again this cold morning...
with your breath of fresh air.....
just beautiful and warm, as always.....

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13 posted 2003-02-08 11:52 AM


As I sometimes say...."Sometimes peanuts,
sometimes shells"...  good thoughts here
Sy.  and so true.

passing shadows
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14 posted 2003-02-08 11:55 AM


enjoyed the early morning write here in my late morning
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2003-02-08 12:19 PM


Magnus
What you say is true, not every shell holds a peanut.

passing shadows
Enjoyed the late morning comment.

Janet Marie
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16 posted 2003-02-08 03:59 PM


I cooked a little broth this morn
Ate it at the break of dawn.
Watched the cold in amber hew
Set aflame a sky of blue.


Set back in my rocking chair
Let my mind its magic share
Walked the airs kaleidoscope
And said a little prayer of hope.

=================================


The moth is running late...
so sorry to make you wait.
Either my computer caught a cold,
or my server is feeling old.

I couldnt get on line
to read your rhymes sublime.
I missed our morning tea...
heck its nearly three!!

So here I am at last ...
and if the moment hasnt passed,
Im leaving Tinker smooches and winkies
for dandy Randy and my Sy-guy Stinky.


*ww*

     

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17 posted 2003-02-08 04:45 PM




(sigh) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, I believe the morning is a time of quintessence and there the tumult from the nightmares or anxieties we may feel dissolve in the rest! (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2003-02-08 04:54 PM


JM,
I did miss you but I knew you would catch me some time today. Love the smooches and winkies and send some back.
WWRS

Noah,
Thank you for the read and always enjoy your comments.

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