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abbe
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since 2003-01-20
Posts 131
michigan, usa

0 posted 2003-02-08 07:29 AM



i need to be kissed

i need
to be
kissed

hard

i want to feel it
crescendo down to
my heart
making it pump
faster sending
the chill
on to my
stomach
curling it up
in knotted ecstasy
spiraling down with
tremors into my thighs
tracing the sparks
past my knees
tingling my calves
and at last
curling my toes

i need to be kissed
while two arms
hold me close
cradling me tight
catching my breath
stealing it away
i need to be kissed
with the kiss of my dreams
i need to be kissed

like this

by you

when i'm
awake


(just some silly fun from me)

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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-02-08 10:26 AM


Wow....let me catch my breath before I reply.
Whew!
Beautiful.
Eric

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-02-08 12:23 PM


wow! very hot!
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2003-02-08 01:28 PM


hmmmmm ..... passionate indeed .... and you didn't forget the curling of the toes! This holds it all!
Margherita

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