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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-02-08 06:21 AM



The Flirtatious Lady

What is it with her
Whatever can it be
Gets more attention
Much more than me

Could it be her eyes
Obliging her gaze
Or how she wiggles
Excitedly she plays

Whatever can it be
Is it her flirty look
Sleeps most her day
She can’t even cook

Could it be her nose
Rubs neath his chin
Stroking her daily
He gives her a grin

A lucky lady is she
Awaiting by his bed
She does no chores
Though loved and fed

I am not competing
How did this occur
This teasing mistress
With four legs and fur

This was lighthearted
Jealous I’ll never be
The flirtatious lady is
The dog in the family


Hope©2000

(Sharing a little fun , found this one in my old files )


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GG
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1 posted 2003-02-08 06:27 AM


lol glad you shared the fun!
its 3 30 AM ..laughs are good.
And I agree, they just get too much attention!... or not enough *calls in her dogs*
Enjoyed!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

HopeS
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2 posted 2003-02-08 06:44 AM


Thanks Alyssa , glad I could bring a few smiles , yes I spoil the dogs too
Hope

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-02-08 07:07 PM


~Smiling  Hope
My cat is or was like that. My husband would give her more attention than me,and she the same... until he left and now knows that I am the one who feeds her and always did.

She won't leave my bed now, whether I am there or not... maybe she's afraid I will leave her, too.

hugss
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4 posted 2003-02-08 07:41 PM


Thank you, thank you, thank you for posting this... I am always glad when I stumble upon a poem that makes me smile.

I have three cats and they are some of the most spoiled little people I know. I have to leave them soon... I'm always so sad that they won't understand. (College)

- Jaime

a man of quality is not threatened by a woman of equality

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-02-08 08:40 PM


Oh this is so cute Hope!
You sure had me until the end.
Good stuff!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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6 posted 2003-02-08 10:25 PM


Hope, I loved this. You
had me until the end, too....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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7 posted 2003-02-09 02:25 AM


great!
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8 posted 2003-02-09 09:38 AM


Loved this!
I'd drop the last stanza, the explanation...it's a kicker as is, doesn't need 'splainin.

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