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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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Words just can’t fulfill The feeling, Of unknown indescribability With nameless reason. - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
GG - I bet the poet that you are can describe them. I will look for it in your next writing... BC |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh my goodness, G.G., I just had this same thought a couple hours ago taking in the view looking out my kitchen window....there was something there, something waiting to be written, something stirring inside...just don't have the words yet. Great expression of that feeling! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Bill, aww! well, you made me laugh with this, but on the whim that you actually meant it, I'm honored and.. hopefully I'll be able to say.. whatever.. soon.  - And so it was that time stood still - |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Denise, I'll be waiting to see the worded 'photo' of it as soon as you can 'develop' it. rofl that was a sad joke.. I must be tired. The saddest part is, I'm still laughing. ohhh boy thanks for replying! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (02-07-2003 11:44 PM).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm laughing too! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
not sure what that means! lol *grin* Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
ALyssa, Well, both of you made me laugh. So, silly, you! Your poem is how I feel sometimes when I try to write a reply to a poem. Enjoyed, Love and hugs, Pat Now, you and Denise best get busy writing that photo...smiling here.... ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
now I've pulled two of you into my sad humor.. I'm not sure if I should be proud or ashamed... but I sure am grinning! Thanks for the reply Pat Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Yet only a poet could say this...so well and so wonderfuly. Great writing. Eric |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Enjoyed reading this, Yes sometimes there's a notion that you can't quite put into words. Denise, i think you wew looking out MY kitchen window. I liked this poem Liz |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Ok, now I'm dizzy...words do that sometimes!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Haven't we all felt this way once or twice...at least? *s M |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Maureen...at least once or twice? . . Hi Alyssa...and everybody  . with hugs from Ethel  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 great! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Eric, Thanks, much appreciated. Though I still can't develop the photo! Elizabeth, I'm glad you enjoyed its interesting, at least, to see what my mind does with things.Duncan, You'd better lay down! Thanks for replying all the same though! Maureen, I think so, yes, at least once or twice. Though I'm not sure if that makes it any more pleasant  ..thanks for replying.Ethel, hiya! thanks for replying!Dixie, glad you think so!  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Alyssa, I believe that is the magic of poetry, you can never cover all the beauty and it is a lifetime coomitment to discover each beautiful image one by one! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing! Mayn love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Dear Alysa, The Tao Te Jing begins with - The Tao which can be told, is not the true Tao. Somethings just can't be described,but such beauty is found when we try. Words are symbols of The Divine...and you do capture this beautifuly. Eric |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Noah, I think it takes a lot more than a lifetime, I think! Thanks for replying and glad you enjoyed. Dearest Eric, aww thank you sir! I think your reply was more poetic than my post! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Alyssa, hmmm, agreed and i feel that way sometimes but doesn't part of the fun from writing come from the way how you capture those elusive feelings into words... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Kaile, you got a point there, a good and right one. But sometimes our minds play tricks on us. And the world keeps spinning. Then ..I'm left with this! Thanks much Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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