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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-07 10:15 PM





We say goodnight...leaning close,
the space between us -
as intimate as the touch
to come.

Our eyes make love
hesitant -
as if they hardly believe
in the truce of a
glance.

And then our fingers reacquaint themselves
to the softness of another.

Our lips touch...pause...and remember.
They have prayed along these lines
before.

We say goodnight...a parting touch
that stretches to forever.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-07 10:16 PM


"Our lips touch...pause...and remember.
They have prayed along these lines
before."

...wow...*sigh*

carol
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2 posted 2003-02-07 11:46 PM


Eric, i love this it is nice
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3 posted 2003-02-07 11:53 PM


Aaaaahhh... this is so deliciously beautiful. Delicate and sweet.  I love it.

Love,
Moca

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4 posted 2003-02-08 12:11 PM


a much needed recipe for all the lonely hearts out there


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5 posted 2003-02-08 12:18 PM


Beautiful...perfectly beautiful!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Black Swan
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6 posted 2003-02-08 12:23 PM


i think everyone summed this one up already.its beautiful...and cute! good job! ~Talia
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7 posted 2003-02-08 02:01 PM




(smiles) Oh Eric, this is soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I long ever so much to say goodnight to my dream girl, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-02-08 02:04 PM


This is so tender, yet heartbeat accelerating!
Margherita

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9 posted 2003-02-09 03:14 AM


mmmmm, very nice
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10 posted 2003-02-10 03:13 AM





oooh! i like this one. makes me wanna go snuggle with my honey

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