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Ivory Melt
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Ivory Melt |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
She wrote a poem on a whim Enchanted I began to play... "A good note", she smiled I melted ivory E And then she began to sing, ever so slowly... "Ooh, my love when you come to me my love I know the truth my love And ooh, my love I KNOW you love me." Finished, and completely, she sighed... "More, please!” I thought to myself as the last remnants of sound gathered up like an ocean wave rolling toward some virgin shore Only to surrender there melted there in ivory |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Robert - you play the ivory well, and sing with them also... BC |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"as the last remnants of sound gathered up like an ocean wave rolling toward some virgin shore Only to surrender there" so beautiful  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes, the image of the ocean wave very much enjoyed. Liked the entire poem. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Adroitly playing more than just the keys.  Well done! I really enjoyed the imagery, RF. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You do play extremely well... Much enjoyed the read...and the music ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very well done! A pleasure Liz |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome imagery! |
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