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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-02-07 09:25 PM

A thousand stars light the sky
shining brilliantly at midnight
raining tears touch my cheek
falling into place
like the sound of laughter
blowing in the breeze
and silent screams
that carry down wind
days end in twilight sunsets
crossing the moon with lonely shadows
the ocean calms at the break of dawn
rising with the morning sun
that kisses me awake
stirring my imagination
giving way to some unknown inspiration
and thus my pen begins
to spill my heart
set in motion
and bring to mind
the contrast of emotions
written in my mood poetry.

~*~

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-02-07 09:29 PM

"raining tears touch my cheek
falling into place
like the sound of laughter
blowing in the breeze "

this is fantastic

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-02-07 10:08 PM

BluesSerenade - in the mood poetry, nice... I like kissing to awake, nice words...

BC

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-02-07 10:31 PM

Thank you SEA gal~
you're too sweet!

Seems I'm always in a 'mood'
perpetual and ever changing~

Thanks BC~

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2003-02-07 10:57 PM

this is beautiful

in fact, I turned my music off when I read this because it creates its own, well, it IS its own.
The thoughts of the tears falling into place like the sound of laughter touching your cheek was especially soothing.
Love it!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2003-02-07 11:01 PM

Lorry, I definately can relate to the mood poetry....it's amazing what comes out sometimes isn't it? I know that every time I click on your name.....I am never disappointed....hugs....

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-02-07 11:14 PM

Can relate...
with the rise and fall of the surf, governed by moon. Nice write. Enjoyed. TD

Denise

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7 posted 2003-02-07 11:18 PM

Soooooo beautiful, BlueSerenade! Just the thought of inspiration oozing effortlessly from someone's pen gives me inspiration!

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-02-07 11:19 PM

Beautiful bluesy, the muses adore you and so do we

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2003-02-08 12:00 PM

GG~ Thank you so much for the nice reply~
I tend to write my moods,  not sure if that's a good thing or not!

Donna~ Did you know that a "Lory" is a truck?  lol~ I do thank you for clicking and enjoying.  hugs back at you~

TD~ Seems my bluesy moods rise and fall alot,
if I could only hold a tune!
Thank you for your understanding reply.

Denise~ Inspiration comes in all forms, I was once inspired by my new coffee maker if you can believe that!   Thank you so much for reading.

Awww shux Raph, that was awful nice of you!

Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

10 posted 2003-02-08 05:37 AM

Enjoyed.."the mood"..

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

11 posted 2003-02-08 12:29 PM

I was here, and I read this, and I loved it all!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2003-02-08 12:58 PM

and a great imagination and twisting of words... always a good read Lori..hey your new pic is up

hugsssss
M

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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2003-02-10 12:12 PM

Lori, I don't know how I missed this one the first go-round, because I look for your poetry, but I'm glad I saw it now. I think it needs another go....

I totally relate to this poem. I tend to write "mood poetry" a lot....and I do have my moods, too. I really enjoyed reading this mood of yours....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-10-2003 12:13 PM).]

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