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Sun of faith
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2003-02-07 08:39 PM



Here is my fear
You hold no remorse
This pain is caused by you
And you are the source
I feel sorrow in the day
And cry all night
You were my angel
You used to shine so bright
Deceived by someone who didn’t care
And by love that was never there

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with you
1 posted 2003-02-07 09:00 PM


this is so very sad...*hugs for you*
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2003-02-07 10:19 PM


Sun of faith - words of sadness you write, my best to you...

BC

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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3 posted 2003-02-07 10:22 PM


This is sad...yet I am reminded that love is never lost.
We are the love that we are looking for.
Its all here.

Very  beautiful poetry.
Eric

GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
4 posted 2003-02-07 10:25 PM


this is so sad, and you expressed it well in few words  ..but it just reminds me so much more how humans fail..

Always, Alyssa


- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

[This message has been edited by GG (02-08-2003 01:15 AM).]

ecrivan
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my own state
5 posted 2003-02-08 12:00 PM


People do go the 'other way' if they don't get an even break..although it could be argued if that is the 'other way'...like the perspective here


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