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poohbear19
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0 posted 2003-02-07 02:54 PM


People lie
People die
Then people sit
And wonder why

Boys are bad
Boys are sad
Boys get upset
Cuz the girls been had

Girls are nice
Girls think twice
But we wonder why
Boys have a price

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2003-02-07 03:18 PM


ROTFL at this one.  
Some boys will be drooling and some girls will turn green when they see your photo.
Hello Rockies neighbor!

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2003-02-07 03:22 PM


This was cute.  

Oh and... I aint turning green

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Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-02-07 03:23 PM


I don't know "Why?" either!... Interesting write!

P.S.

Your photo may make some "good" boys have "bad" thoughts! tehe

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel


Ericc
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4 posted 2003-02-07 05:10 PM


You say alot with a few well chosen words. Nicely done!
Eric

poohbear19
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5 posted 2003-02-07 05:38 PM


Thank you all for your comments. Thats good, that everyone likes my photo but I have a boyfriend, but thanks for liking it. I make no sense today....sorry about that.

Andrea

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-02-07 10:21 PM


poohbear19 - rhymy write. Nice as it flows...

BC

carol
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7 posted 2003-02-07 11:10 PM


poohbear19, this is nice
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