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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-07 09:16 AM


          I am the tide to the pull
          of your moon -

          I rise to meet you.

          My blood is an ocean.

          Responding to the gravity
          of your touch.

         There is a rise and fall
         to all things.

         Yet you and I remain forever.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-07 09:18 AM



(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, know your love will always be the sun and the moon, when the sun may not be shining, the moons light will take her place! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira
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2 posted 2003-02-07 09:22 AM

Eric, this is beautiful...
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3 posted 2003-02-07 09:23 AM

Very very lovely thoughts.
Nicely done.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~
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4 posted 2003-02-07 08:23 PM

very....very beautiful....
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5 posted 2003-02-07 08:34 PM

how sweet!!!
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with you
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of course you have to know.....I love this
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