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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2003-02-07 08:32 AM


No Sea Of Love
~*~
My life is dark and dreary
and like the relentless rain
beating on my window pane
I can’t find the right key
to happiness
though I try every door that opens
the world offers no sea
of love
for me


BloomingRose

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-02-07 08:37 AM


BloomingRose
What you can't see does not mean it is not there. Enjoyed the read.

Ericc
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2 posted 2003-02-07 09:05 AM


Poingent and beautiful.
Eric

SmartChick
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3 posted 2003-02-07 10:46 AM


Awwww, this is so sad. I know you will find love again. Just be real careful. Make sure the love is true.
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4 posted 2003-02-07 10:49 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Debra, I know this feeling of desolation too, just believe in your heart the bulbs will bloom soon and springs flowers and the waters of Eden will come gushing to you! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krystopher Morris
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5 posted 2003-02-07 10:54 AM


The world offers love when you pursue it, We're here for you all the way, BloomingRose! Keep it up and thanks!

Poetry is love and love is life.

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-02-07 03:45 PM


Hi there, Deb
this says the way I feel most of the time...even with the right key, sometimes the lock needs oiling.
Most times, I try to accept that there will be no one special in my life ever again.

hugs
M

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-02-07 04:11 PM


I'm with you on this one! But I'm not looking to drown...so they can keep the keys for all I care...
BloomingRose
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8 posted 2003-02-07 04:35 PM


Thanks so much for your kind words.
You all are a blessing.

Hugs,
Deb

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