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Open Poetry #24

Concentric

Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2003-02-07 05:00 AM

All of us are unsuspecting fools
A collection of atomic mass
Each a splash in the gene pool
The ripples of our submergence
Echo out in tireless tides
A mass of concentric circles
Balanced in complex wave forms
In an equation chaos theory
Cannot comprehend nor class

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2003-02-07 08:55 AM

I think more of us need to learn the ramifications of interfering with that concentricity... indeed... Well said, T..

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-02-07 08:59 AM

Triskaidekaphobia
Ours is not to question why ours is but to do and die. Enjoyed.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-02-07 11:20 AM

The next time there will be multiple Friday the 13ths will be 2009.
Curiosity makes me ask, triskaidekaphobia, do you fear the number 13?
Concentric circles overlapping...yes, but I disagree that ALL are asleep, unaware, unsuspecting.
Interesting write.
WELCOME to Passions!

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-07-2003 11:21 AM).]

Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

4 posted 2003-02-08 02:28 AM

i like your style ~Talia

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