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Black Swan
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on the moon

0 posted 2003-02-07 02:44 AM


when I lie from a raspberry dream  
I hear the call from within to move away from the open flames
and remaim patient all the same
when I sing I hear my soul
I feel the grass I know this world
I know my wait will be worth the time
but the wind has a mind of its own and I cant change his mind
frustrating has become my known self
confused has become my outlook from the eyes of my shell
and I emerge to see the day
that the flames have risen and become asquew
and the sky turnes orange from the glow within you
what a day
see the way I see him
feel the way I hurt when I hear his name
chills have run themselves across my skin
all I ever wanted dear was to win

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-02-07 11:11 AM


but the wind has a mind of its own and I cant change his mind
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No, you can't change the direction or force of it, but you sure can change how you react to it.

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2 posted 2003-02-07 11:17 AM


Talia,
this one hurts. Even though written beautifully
it is so sad. If you're experiencing this, I hope things
will be better soon.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-02-07 07:48 PM


Awesome....you paint a strong image.
Eric

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Georgia
4 posted 2003-02-11 12:20 PM


Nicely done!
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5 posted 2003-02-11 04:21 PM


Wow, I love the images you painted here; powerful!

Maree

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