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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-02-07 12:58 PM



Sweet Summer Wine

Small round globes
hanging out on the vine
patiently waiting to be
picked at harvest time.

And I patiently wait
for her to be mine.
To pluck her and
to taste of her
sweet summer wine.

JamesLee
February06
2003

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Larry C
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1 posted 2003-02-07 01:07 AM


JM,
I don't drink. But you make it sound good! Nice write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-02-07 01:43 AM


James, this is a prety poem. I like it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-02-07 11:17 AM


Wow I loved the imagery. Very well done!
BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2003-02-08 09:04 PM


Very sweet indeed!

Patience is a virtue?

yea, yea, yea!  

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-02-08 09:07 PM


Mmmm, yes enjoyed the taste of this one James!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

carol
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6 posted 2003-02-08 11:08 PM


James Michael,very nice made me wish i could go to our grape vines and pick some,but this is to early in the year here.

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

[This message has been edited by carol (02-08-2003 11:09 PM).]

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7 posted 2003-02-08 11:45 PM




(smiles) Oh James, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as I long for the summers beauty so much! (sigh) This is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-02-09 02:03 AM


sensual!
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