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Open Poetry #24

mountains of sunsets

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-02-06 10:37 PM

another painted sky
without you,
sunsets accumulate,
moments pile up high,
paralel to times passage,
dreams that whisper,
still endure, despite
this life for me, right now
as more minutes
become lost,
waiting and wondering,
can this transcend,
become real,
before pretty pictures
above,
become pale,
in colors,
draining from the sky,
emptied roses from these eyes,
looking up,
losing time
becoming older,
just living
to love you,
waiting
to die

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-06 10:40 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-02-06 10:51 PM

emptied roses from these eyes,
looking up,
losing time

How quickly it passes....
some days I feel like my wing span doesn't reach quite as far as it used to.

I have to tell you Michele, you write some hard truth's and it does my heart good to read you.

Stands to reason, being a couple goddesses and all!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-02-06 10:58 PM

feel the ache, have fun and live instead bahama mama

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-02-06 10:58 PM

A fine wine has aged so well from the fruits of your labors. Just wanted you to know...
TD

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

5 posted 2003-02-08 05:33 AM

"just living
to love you,
waiting
to die"

Wow!!!!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-02-08 11:17 AM

inkedgoddess - lonliness I feel in your writing. You do tell it like it is...

BC

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-02-08 11:33 AM

inkedgoddess
A lvely write, enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-02-08 12:01 PM

maybe we could sit and wait to die together, ey?

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