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0 posted 2003-02-06 09:20 PM



Lost in memories, again.
Restless midnite dreams
only make the heartache
pour from pores
that bleed dry
the very soul of me,
the memory of touch,
of arms that once held me tight,
making love all night,
even as we watched the rising sun,
the one that never brightened my day
as did the smile on your face.

Oh, how I do miss you.

Ours was a love affair
written passionately
on the face of the moon
as it showered us with hope
and certainty
that this was the greatest love
of all eternity.

Oddly enough,
it still is.


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-06 09:31 PM



Oh, how I do miss you...

~*~

An Affair to Remember...

you made me think of that...
you write so well...

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2 posted 2003-02-06 09:34 PM


My heart cries out a thank you, for letting me bleed a little in public.
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3 posted 2003-02-06 09:48 PM


Bleed if you must but heal too
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4 posted 2003-02-06 09:51 PM


Your writes are so heartrending...I hope that "You'll always have Paris" with the subject of your writing.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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5 posted 2003-02-06 09:58 PM


memories are such an easy place to get lost in. Its when time is still and.. I'd go on too long if I started.
This is a piece of your heart I thank you for letting me see.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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6 posted 2003-02-06 10:50 PM


"even as we watched the rising sun,
the one that never brightened my day
as did the smile on your face.

Oh, how I do miss you."


this just aches so much....
hugs for you

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7 posted 2003-02-07 12:06 PM


Raph, yes, still healing.

KJ, thank you for that.

GG, thanks. Yes, some nights I prefer getting lost in reverie.

SEA, thank you dear friend, for the heart hugs.  

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8 posted 2003-02-07 12:49 PM


I can relate to this very well.
Time helps when nothing else will.

Hugs,
Deb

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9 posted 2003-02-07 12:52 PM


Thank you, Deb.
Any idea just how long it might take?
A lifetime, it seems.

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10 posted 2003-02-07 12:53 PM




Kacy,
         

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11 posted 2003-02-07 03:19 PM


Those memories are what makes it so hard to forget. It does take time to get over a lost love. And, I hope for you, it is soon.
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12 posted 2003-02-07 04:17 PM


good writing, love the thought
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13 posted 2003-02-07 06:53 PM


well written window into an ache of life - thanks for offering us the window - Paul
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14 posted 2003-02-07 08:40 PM


Very emotional writing, touched with the ache of love.  I am keeping this...
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