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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-02-06 07:31 PM

I met you in the Marina
as we played aboard the
sloop Jolly JC,
and my heart drifted
into the infinity
of your eyes
under Vincent blue skies.
Clouds from the Gods above
covered my searching soul
with undying Love;
and even when you later
broke my heart,
I whispered
"Thank you."

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-02-06 07:34 PM

Kacy,

Smiling here, just love this! Great last line...

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-02-06 07:49 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Kacy, I was hoping for a happy ending, but I suppose it is all in His plan and out of it there is a souvenir by any cause! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-02-06 09:27 PM

Thanks, for sailing with me for a moment.

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

4 posted 2003-02-06 09:49 PM

Clouds from the Gods above
covered my searching soul
with undying Love;
and even when you later
broke my heart,
I whispered
"Thank you."

There are many nice phrases in this write, but "even when you later broke my heart" is wondrous. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-02-06 09:57 PM

Thanks Kacy, got me thinking of the beach boys sloop john b..love them boys, whoa wait that last line sounds like something Michael Jackson would say..BEACH boys

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-02-06 11:53 PM

KJ, thank you for that tender reply. It was a wondrous affair while it lasted.

Raph, yes, I grew up singing to those guys.I still like them.
Like an MJ line? you think so? Wow, what a 'thriller' to hear that.

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