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MUY LEJOS (Far Away)
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MUY LEJOS (Far Away) |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
Not lost, just delayed Frozen by feelings for you Something must come of us I need a “me and you” I don’t want to be left in the dark Scared, afraid, alone Be my shelter at night The greatest feelings known Lost in a world of hate Love would make us free We could be together forever Create happiness endlessly My life has just begun I need you near Be apart of me I need you here |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
lejos pero cerca...bien hecho  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautifully said I enjoyed this |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I don’t want to be left in the dark Scared, afraid, alone Be my shelter at night" Hope this beautiful message gets through to the intended. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Que precioso es tu poema! Ay, que lindo... Gracias por tus palabras muy profundo y dulce... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quiet, sincere, heartfelt... You fit your name very well... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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