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Open Poetry #24

Just wait

Sun of faith
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 101

0 posted 2003-02-06 06:26 PM

Everyday there’s a war
I keep on loosing
I have to be strong
I can’t keep choosing
Stop my looking
Let it find me
For once it does
I’ll truly be happy.

Jaime

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Posts 250

1 posted 2003-02-06 06:55 PM

Short, which I can always appreciate...

I like how it feels broken up and glued back together... how these seem like words that might be playing over and over in your mind...

- Jaime

Shiva went on break now look at how much it's gonna take to make this place a space where we can breathe.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-02-06 07:18 PM

There is a Sufi paradox -
Those who search for The Beloved,
will never find Her.
Yet He will never reveal Himself,
to those who never look.

It's in the surrendering process that we discover the nature of love.

To me....your poem said this beautifuly.
Thank you (sorry to ramble!)
Eric

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2003-02-06 10:41 PM

it's when you stop looking, that it is finally found

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