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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2003-02-06 05:37 PM












SWEET TALK
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/12/02



Sweet talk to me, darling
Whisper to my ear
All the lovely things
I’ve dreamed to hear

These terms of endearment
The ballet of poetic romance
Flows from your sugary lips
As we waltz in this slow dance



Your words are honeyed
You sing with classical beauty
Come, my love, my sweet queen
Sweet talk your love to me

I’ll sweet talk to you, my Guinevere
As doth the angels in matrimony
I’ll sweet talk until your heart melts with cheer
My sweet lovely lady















"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-06-2003 05:39 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-06 05:38 PM


Beautiful Noah

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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2 posted 2003-02-06 05:39 PM


Yea... reminds me of me and Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

GG
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3 posted 2003-02-06 05:44 PM


Beautiful Noah!
not only does it make me want to it candy hearts, it makes me want to eat them while whispering something sweet to someone I love.
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-02-06 05:49 PM


Noah, simply beautiful....I still wish I could put
some of this pretty art work on my poems. It really
adds to the poem, doesn't it?
I'm getting XP put in my computer next week.
A friend has another program she is going to
give to me that might help me, and another friend
gave me a couple of programs that should help
me to learn more about web pages and graphics. So,
maybe soon I can be putting pretty pictures, too.

In the meantime, I will enjoy all these of yours and
others here at PIP.
Thank you for sharing these with us, friend..

poohbear19
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5 posted 2003-02-06 05:50 PM


very beautiful

andrea

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6 posted 2003-02-06 06:45 PM


beautiful
Ericc
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7 posted 2003-02-06 07:19 PM


Every word carefuly chosen to speak of love.
Awesome!
Eric

Nan
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8 posted 2003-02-06 08:53 PM


Very nice, Noah...
scorpio
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9 posted 2003-02-06 09:02 PM


Most romantic, Noah...

believe in what your heart feels...

Suetang
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10 posted 2003-02-06 10:25 PM


Hello Noah

Your words ooze with love and romance and I just adore the picture which compliments your words perfectly.

For you :

"You cannot touch love,
but you can feel
the sweetness
that it pours
into everything."

And this ......

"Love makes
bitter things sweet;
Love converts base copper to gold.
By love, dregs become clear;
by love pains become healing.
By love the dead
are brought to life;
By love a King is made a slave."

I hope you like these Noah.

Take care my friend........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

carol
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11 posted 2003-02-07 12:03 PM


Noah, i really loved this it is so pretty
vlraynes
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12 posted 2003-02-08 12:32 PM



Beautifully done, Noah.
I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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