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vandana
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0 posted 2003-02-06 02:36 PM


If you say goodbye
Would you break my heart
If you say goodbye to me
If you say
It Is over
Would our love will remain
The same
Would you ever call my name
Again
Whenever If you feel the pain
Inside
Would you think rain will come
Again
Shine our dreams away
If you say goodbye
Would you say love has ended
Forever
And would you bring my tears
Again
In my eyes
You would see love I feeel for you
If you would hurt me
Again
If you say goodbye to me
Would break my heart
And heaven knows
When I wIll meet again
If time will be right again
For us
If you say goodbye

[This message has been edited by vandana (02-06-2003 05:13 PM).]

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NewEnglandlazurlu
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1 posted 2003-02-06 02:45 PM


Very nicely written.  Hugs, Marti

'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.'

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-02-06 02:47 PM



Such a big IF...
thinking of you, little one...

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-02-06 04:40 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Vandana, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hope this is not related to you now and love never bids farewell to you as you are deserving of its welcoming! (sigh) I send angel hugs out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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