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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-06 02:30 PM


Shell Song

there
we were
on abandoned
beach
hidden under
covers of
a blanket
with no color
letting
the wind
wash us
you handed me
the shell
and
I heard
the echoes
of you


"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2003-02-06 02:31 PM


helen - now that's my kind of beach...

BC

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-02-06 03:40 PM


This is exremely beautiful.
Thanks.
Eric

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-02-06 04:19 PM


Beautiful poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

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