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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-06 12:16 PM


Refraction

in a world
of shadows
I am
invisible to you
standing opaque
the curve unclear
not understanding
how you
can let
the light
back in
and I
just stand
behind it
smiling

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-06 12:22 PM


how could you ever be invisible? not possible! but I know it feels that way sometimes, yeah
Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-02-06 01:39 PM


i think we all feel that way at one time or another
Ericc
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3 posted 2003-02-06 02:13 PM


Beautiful written and very poingent.
Eric

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-02-06 02:19 PM


Love this Helen...
I know this feeling...
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2003-02-06 02:28 PM


Helen, Ive known this feeling, too...
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