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Inner Struggle
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Inner Struggle |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Inner Struggle (2/6/03 JDC) Today my need is so intense It is shredding my every defense No, no, no! My mind cries Just more lies Just your scent Would ruin my elusive intent Yes, yes, yes.. My heart sighs Just more futile tries I don’t want you My love is cruel Why, Why, Why As my faith dies Just more goodbyes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sometimes a goodbye is the only way to redeem your trust M |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is hard. It hurts just reading it because it have been there. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Nice read Those inner struggle can be difficult I have them all the time And with time I have gotten some control over them Gloom |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all. Today was just one of those days that I was dying to pick up the phone, email...and I just hate my unanswered need. Ahhhhh...tomorrow will be better I am sure. Susan C. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed the read,... Here's to better days!  ~Huhs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
i second that! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, I'm sorry for your pain. I also have felt this in the past, and it's not a good feeling. Heart hugs to you,  Ethel |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
you described inner struggle well. I can tell you feel it. But yes, tomorrow is another day, and hopes are new. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Sad and sweet... such passion in your struggle... you are weak and strong at once. Lovely write... thank you so much for sharing... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
a good piece |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, tomorrow will be better...easier to handle...smile and walk on! |
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