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ctowen
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0 posted 2003-02-05 11:53 PM


A look in the eye,
an unheard thought
     ... unspoken

  The answers to why,
  matters of the heart.

With an outreached hand,
such trust in whole
     ... unbroken

  footsteps in the sand,
  as deep as the soul.

     ... unforgotten

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-05 11:55 PM


I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

GG
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2 posted 2003-02-06 12:17 PM


so much is said with a look in the eye.
I enjoyed this

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2003-02-06 01:17 AM


Sometimes for some of us if we're lucky enough... we are gifted with an unbroken trust.

Beautiful sentiment Craig~

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4 posted 2003-02-06 02:53 AM


beautiful!
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5 posted 2003-02-06 07:34 PM


I miss you


ME~

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-02-06 07:52 PM




(sigh) Oh Craig, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as it must feel so unbelievable to unravel an unspoken eternal love! (big hugggsssssss) May this joy always wreathe your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Gaia
7 posted 2003-02-07 12:19 PM


The smallest footsteps can leave a deep impression, as can the words of a poet painted upon a blue canvas.

Nan
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8 posted 2003-02-07 11:06 AM


This is quite a lovely piece, ctowen...
Robert Frazier
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9 posted 2003-02-07 12:44 PM


Ever met someone for the first time and connected?  Had that same feeling when I read your poem.  I'll immediately look for more of yours!

Rf

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