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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2003-02-05 05:48 PM



Just Me

A soft breeze tickles my ear
I swear I hear
something
but straining
I hear
no knight in shining armor
no angel wings fluttering
just me
BloomingRose



© Copyright 2003 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
GG
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1 posted 2003-02-05 05:56 PM


Just, you?
no, no, thats not how it works.
You, are much more than 'just'
This is short but powerful.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Ericc
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2 posted 2003-02-05 06:42 PM


This is sweetly beautiful.
I really loved it!
Eric

Denise
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3 posted 2003-02-05 09:15 PM


Very beautiful, Deb! Lovely!
ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-02-05 09:48 PM


Big grin...even the beauty of nature paled in your light on this page. ThisDiamond
bklynboy
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5 posted 2003-02-06 03:28 AM


Short and sweet. A very nice writing. Good job!
passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-02-06 03:39 AM


sigh
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7 posted 2003-02-06 04:55 PM




(sigh) Yes, you have the music in your heart so let it whisper on liken the zephyr! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is comforting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Robert Frazier
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8 posted 2003-02-06 05:53 PM


A poem I'll likely recall next time a light breeze touches the back of my neck.  Very nice!
seven_conscious
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9 posted 2003-02-06 05:58 PM


quick and pretty.  liked it a lot
vandana
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10 posted 2003-02-06 06:44 PM


enjoyed
BloomingRose
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11 posted 2003-02-06 08:26 PM


Thank you all very much for you thoughtful warm replies.
Hugs,
Deb

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