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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-02-05 05:42 PM


“TO DANCE WITH YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Night thoughts are soft as moonbeams,
shadows embrace each other this night,
to look at you into eyes enchanting,
wanting to dance with you in candlelight…

Music plays softly in rhythmic mood,
perhaps a guitar strums to mesmerize,
would you dance are whispered words,
your charming smile returns butterflies…

Tender fingers placed upon your waist,
hips move swaying gently to entwine,
lips are soft with passions caress,
closer is your touch, melting to combine…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
GG
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1 posted 2003-02-05 05:54 PM


You've made me want to dance!
I'm gonna go turn on some music and dance but... none of the music will be as soft and melodic as you've written this.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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2 posted 2003-02-05 06:00 PM


Mmmm, love to dance in the moonlight..
Wonderfully romantic write Bill.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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3 posted 2003-02-05 06:47 PM


ENJOY YOUR READ
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4 posted 2003-02-05 06:50 PM


...let's dance...

always you write so lovely

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5 posted 2003-02-05 07:51 PM


Oh BC how I wish I had the energy to dance other than in my dreams.

You know I always love your poems.

Hugs, Marti

'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.'

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6 posted 2003-02-05 08:51 PM




(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous dance and I know your love would never resist to take your hand like this! (big hugggssssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2003-02-05 09:20 PM


How I love the dance...

Beautiful.

Thank you...

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8 posted 2003-02-05 09:27 PM


Bill, what good thoughts you made come to my mind......
My Love and me at the beach, dancing
in the moonlight to soft romantic music...
after we've eaten a delicious dinner by candlelight...........

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-05-2003 09:28 PM).]

Martie
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9 posted 2003-02-06 02:34 PM


Bill--At times, there is nothing more romantic than a slow dance.  
Suetang
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10 posted 2003-02-06 03:44 PM


Hello Bill

Such a beautiful picture you have painted from your palette of words....exquisite!

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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