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bad omens
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bad omens |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
Bright sunlight shines through Slats from the blind Tracing striped patterns across my desk and wall And I dare myself to think of happy thoughts On this day of bad omens Future spring to lighten the mood Good news to make the heart sing Life twisting in pattens of loss And flavors of hate Turn this day around Leave the gray of cold behind Reach out for the good You are The good you can be Paint a new landscape With this brush of mine No more bad omens After all They are our own making |
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Jaime
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"And I dare myself to think of happy thoughts On this day of bad omens" Some days it's so scary to think happy thoughts. I liked those lines a lot. - Jaime  Shiva went on break now look at how much it's gonna take to make this place a space where we can breathe. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I like the picture of sitting at your work desk, maybe pencil in hand and supposed to be working but entranced and englufed in thought ... And to go from a sorrowful thing and give it a good ending, I like this! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....I loved everything about this! Thanks. Eric |
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