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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-05 02:49 PM


Night Wings

the night
is no longer
silent
the wind
carries
your whispers
they ride
dark waves
of air
singing on
the wings
of night


"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-02-05 02:59 PM


very pretty Helen

M

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-02-05 03:19 PM


where you been? I've been missin' ya!
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-02-06 10:33 PM


your whispers they ride..

So soft is the sound of this~

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
4 posted 2003-02-07 03:38 PM


Romantic write, Helen...the wind at night whispers my love's name...

believe in what your heart feels...

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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5 posted 2003-02-07 05:03 PM


This is so pretty.
Thanks.
Eric

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