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vandana
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0 posted 2003-02-05 12:37 PM


WIsh I could love you agaIn?
Would love you more
Each day
All the way
To the moment.....
WIsh I would tell you?
How much I love you?
If the sea so blue
Don't care about the people
MIght say
Wish I would dream
About loving you again?
Knowing the sky so dark and grey
Rain would be here
Any minute
Wish I would start all over again
Would feel the pain and sorrow?
Would see tomorrow again?
Love you again
Wish I could love you?

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-05 12:40 PM


I really like this poem a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-02-05 12:45 PM


vandana, what a beauty! I liked this lots!
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-02-05 03:23 PM


enjoyed your words V

hugss
M

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-02-05 11:59 PM




(sigh) Oh Vandana, so much is possible and I certainly hope you get the love you deserve and he can hear your plea! (big hugggssssssss) This is wonderfully sincere, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-02-07 12:19 PM


Hope good things happen for you vandana...James
vlraynes
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6 posted 2003-02-08 12:34 PM



Vandana~
This is just lovely...much enjoyed.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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