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chasing a pisces |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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holding on dreaming alone i watch you i despite you flowing from place to place retracing the days we met i want you to bleed to me release the fake show me your face your eyes say to me i will let you be free dont worry your pretty head im not like that im not them honesty by the skin of your teeth security serenity freedom from myself i yell i scream i cut i bleed contridicting the elements i want you, enough said |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
heartache shows brightly here...nice ending line |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
i want you to bleed to me release the fake show me your face good lines... sometimes it seems we never really get to see the "other's" face in our life... just what they show us. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Some brilliant lines in this one! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Talia, this is so very heartawrenchingly beautiful, sweet friend, I hope soon your hearts yearning is answered, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Talia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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