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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-02-05 03:55 AM


i taste your being i taste your feeling
bend to me on your needs
cry alone in the woods and take me with you
pretty shows from the stars
dancing being merry and fascinating clearly
what i want i dont have time
bellflower honey melon waste my mind
once again i will rise and fall
from within iam free to raom the sea
calm ocean floor to breeze my fear
and a cherry i chew
from a spaced out kinda meaning
fun funn funnn
try i try
oh so high
jump an extra mile
take these wings
take this ring
gave up control
beautiful i find
kinda a shame
when someone falls
oh oh i hear him calling
uh no i see birds flying
to know what i know all alone
whatever time calls
even now im running to you
even know im far from you
just ask why u and i
ask me why u know why
see me leave mountain stream
and now i wonder why even now even under this shower of stars
i fall


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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2003-02-05 09:04 AM


i taste your being i taste your feeling
bend to me on your needs
cry alone in the woods and take me with you
pretty shows from the stars
dancing being merry and fascinating clearly
what i want i dont have time
bellflower honey melon waste my mind
once again i will rise and fall
from within iam free to raom the sea
calm ocean floor to breeze my fear
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to know what i know all alone
whatever time calls
even now im running to you
even know im far from you
just ask why u and i
ask me why u know why
see me leave mountain stream
and now i wonder why even now even under this shower of stars
i fall
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Wonderful poetic employ of imagery and emotions...this is a lovely surreal gem of pen!
Welcome to Poetry Land Black Swan...nice to have you here with us.


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