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Mistletoe Angel
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MISS ME
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/10/01



Do you miss me?
I can't stop thinking about you
Along with you, a huge part of my heart has left me
You are everything that's true

Have you missed me?
I can't sleep at night, lonely without you, poignant arrows of sorrow aching my heart, tracing bittersweet dents
I burn for you, my love, when we are together, we explode in felicity
I try and keep strong, but you are everything to me, all I have is memories remnants



Oh love, do you miss me?
Oh, how I pray you'll return to our home sweet home
Our home is where the heart is, and you are my joy, sweetie
Without you, I feel scared, and I don't know which way I must go

Oh love, have you missed me?
Because my heart bleeds for you
Oh love, can you see how much I love you, together, we feel free
Oh love...I miss you so, please come back...I need you
I miss you...
I love you...
















"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-04-2003 11:09 PM).]
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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-04 11:08 PM

I really like this one Noah

Cold hands means a warm heart
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2 posted 2003-02-04 11:09 PM

who wouldn't miss you?? You are such a sweetie pie
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3 posted 2003-02-04 11:14 PM

The missing leaves an ache all it's own.

Sweet are your candy heart poems dear Noah~
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4 posted 2003-02-05 12:32 PM

Noah i really liked this it is sure something to think about
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liked this
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7 posted 2003-02-05 07:49 PM

Noah - you would make your sweetheart swoon my friend with words like these...

BC
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