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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-02-04 10:34 PM

What became a whisper in my heart
Set on pearl seeded bodice of a chiffon wind
More a wrap of anticipation than a fitted silk suit
More the freedom of billowing clouds than the snug
of a moist morning

How the truth can direct of the heart in sure footed knowing
Often stilled in the twilight of ambition and the seeking of gold

Yet to hear the unstoppable twinkling of chimes, silver soft
I discover your moment, materialized before me
To wrap us into love's sheer embrace
What became a whisper in my heart

Copyright Kkh 2/4/03

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-04 10:34 PM

Beautiful as usual

Cold hands means a warm heart

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-02-04 10:38 PM

my goodness, I can't pick a favorite line here, truly a beautiful write!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-02-04 10:42 PM

Oh what a beautiful write Kathleen!
Wonderful!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2003-02-04 10:59 PM

This is so beautiful.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-02-04 11:25 PM

(sigh) Oh Kathleen, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your love poetry does and how it seems to be like a needle pushed through when love first whispers! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank youn for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

6 posted 2003-02-05 07:33 AM

Reads like a gentle sigh--enjoyed!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2003-02-05 09:02 AM

What became my most favorite of your poems? This one! I love it.

It ~flows~ so beautifully; especially pretty.

Thank you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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