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bklynboy
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0 posted 2003-02-04 09:41 PM



tired eyes
weary eyes
looking for you

brown eyes
so passionate
they shine will a renewed sexualty

brown eyes
that twinkle
with mischief

blue eyes
caribbean sea
bedroom eyes

blue eyes
so clear
you can look into my soul

brown eyes
that see what other can not
but sometimes looks past the obvious

blues eyes
that hope
filled with compassion and understanding

brown eyes
aggressive with desire
if properly motivated

blue eyes
not docile
but receptive

tired eyes
weary eyes
looking for you

always there
but sometimes blind
to bright sunshine
and full moons



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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-04 09:42 PM


I like the discriptiveness. awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

*Star*
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since 2003-02-03
Posts 32
Iowa
2 posted 2003-02-04 09:43 PM


I love your descriptions, I can "see" exactly what you're writing about
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
3 posted 2003-02-04 09:44 PM


ooh, aah, how i wish someone would write about my sparkling brown eyes, like he used to, many moons ago.............woe is me
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-02-05 02:51 AM


nice
inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-02-05 08:10 PM


did you see her eyes over the atlantic, in your first class seat, glass of dewars in your executive hand, wearing a 20plus
tarnished gold band? did u,huh, did you,?

bklynboy
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6 posted 2003-02-05 08:23 PM


I fly coach unless I get a complimentary upgrade, I hate dewars, lost the tarnished band a long time ago and she weighed 250lbs. I gave her 1/2 my seat cause I am a gentleman and she wore tinted glasses but really couldnt see her eyes because of the lbs of makeup. Otherwise she was perfect.
cinnamongirl
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7 posted 2003-02-05 09:25 PM


I can feel the longing in your words.  Bittersweet and beautiful.

Thank you... for sharing.

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2003-02-05 11:02 PM



coach?
kind of hard to make the milehigh club over there........and i thought you were a highroller

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-02-05 11:10 PM


I liked your description of the eyes. Very pretty...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

bklynboy
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florida
10 posted 2003-02-06 03:17 AM


Coach.....hey I got a budget.
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