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poohbear19
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0 posted 2003-02-04 08:52 PM


Where do dreams hide?
Maybe by you bedside.

Somewhere maybe you could see.
Or in the sky flying free.

Or far away in a foreign land.
Or under your feet beneath the sand.

Dreams are everywhere, you see.
They are in you and me.

Dreams are like clouds in the sky,
For you can reach them if you try.

And they will never leave a day,
For dreams unfilled will always stay.

© Copyright 2003 Andrea M. K. - All Rights Reserved
cinnamongirl
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1 posted 2003-02-04 09:16 PM


How true... dreams are everywhere, and they are never truly hiding- it is only that we aren't looking to find them!  

A wonderful write... thank you!!

Sun of faith
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2 posted 2003-02-04 09:16 PM


I hope that all your dreams come true, wherever they are and whatever they are, for dreams are to be created into reallity.
Nicely writin piece, i really enjoyed it!

*Star*
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3 posted 2003-02-04 09:47 PM


A dream is an awesome thing, and so is your poem
the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-02-04 09:47 PM


I really liked this. Good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

carol
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5 posted 2003-02-05 12:36 PM


poohbear19, this is lovely and so right
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6 posted 2003-02-05 01:17 AM


Andrea,
this is a really pretty poem. I think we should
never lose our dreams.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Elie
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7 posted 2003-02-05 01:36 AM


Dreams unfilled will always stay...I agree.
Beautiful poem

GG
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Lost in thought
8 posted 2003-02-05 02:02 AM


reaching the clouds was, once, just a dream too
I like this!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Daniel J D
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9 posted 2003-02-05 02:15 AM


This is wonderful and a pleasure to read. I have also posted "Dreams" on this page. Perhaps you may wish to check it out.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2003-02-05 02:25 AM


good write!
JamesMichael
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11 posted 2003-02-05 03:57 AM


Nice thoughts...enjoyed...James
Black Swan
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12 posted 2003-02-05 05:11 AM


this poem is adorable! :P and it really made me smile
poohbear19
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13 posted 2003-02-05 07:49 PM


Thank you all, and dreams are good for everyone.

andrea

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