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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-02-04 08:30 PM


“MY HEART”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Sometimes when I’m
close to you my heart
beats so fast that
I wonder if it will
stay together…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-04 08:39 PM




(sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as you truly are a romantic who is destined to make your love swoon always! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2003-02-04 08:50 PM


this is very good, thank you so much for sharing it with everyone. Keep on writing for poetry is what everyone trys to write but only a select few can actually make sense of it.

Andrea

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3 posted 2003-02-04 09:11 PM


nice
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2003-02-04 10:13 PM


very good - you have said just enough to complete the picture nicely!  bravo! warm regards, Roniece
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5 posted 2003-02-04 11:29 PM


now that is what I call warm fuzzies!!
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6 posted 2003-02-05 12:26 PM


Bill, this is cute.
I love it...

GG
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7 posted 2003-02-05 01:42 AM


this m'friend is sweet and cute
I love it!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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8 posted 2003-02-05 01:49 AM




Bill,

Romantic and sweet. For those times when 'it' doesn't work out, must be where the term 'heart-breaking comes from...

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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9 posted 2003-02-05 02:29 AM


that's what my old man said to me...he said they were gonna have to carry him out on a stretcher...lol
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10 posted 2003-02-06 01:03 AM


Nothing like the pounding of ones heart to remind us that love is indeed alive and well.

Nice write BC~

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11 posted 2003-02-06 01:27 PM


Bill--I know this feeling..it's wonderful and frightening.
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12 posted 2003-02-06 01:34 PM


I  love this one Bill...I have felt like this *s

hugsss
M

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13 posted 2003-02-06 01:56 PM


I know this feeling!!
Makes ya kinda scared...yet it's wonderful.
~Hugs & Smiles~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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