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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2003-02-04 04:06 PM










(Here's a special Wedding Candy Heart Poem for all engaged couples out there letting their love become a gift of a lifetime!)





MARRY ME
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/12/02

I love you so much, my darling
I have thought this over for so long
You have been on my mind frequently
Your heart always has me singing a happy song

I hear your voice through the cooing of a dove
I taste your sweetness through every dancing moon beam
You are my one true love
You engrave all my fondest memories on the sands of my hearts beach

I'm down on my knees to your feet
Blessed to worship such an angel as you
You are a miracle to me
I never thought I'd find such a love so true...

My sweet dove,
I have dreamed of this day together when we can hear the church bells ring
My love,
Will you marry me?














"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-04-2003 04:12 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-04 04:12 PM


No, but thanks for asking.

Sorry, Noah.
But HALLMARK? EAT YOUR HEART OUT!
The Mistletoe Angel strikes again!

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2 posted 2003-02-04 04:18 PM


Wow, even I'D marry ya after that!

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3 posted 2003-02-04 04:34 PM


...Okay! You've sold me on the idea with this candy love! When? tehe

Sending extra big hugs!
EA

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4 posted 2003-02-04 05:02 PM


Hmmmmm....I will save this for...that special time!
Thanks.
Eric

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5 posted 2003-02-04 05:09 PM


This is so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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6 posted 2003-02-04 05:13 PM


And she said yes, yes, yes!!! Oh, Noah, this is beautiful, and very special, especially to this newlywed!!!!  (Music Maker likes it too!!!!!) Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts with us....   ~~S~~

A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!

Brad Majors
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7 posted 2003-02-04 06:01 PM


Beautiful piece
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8 posted 2003-02-04 06:03 PM


Noah,
This is such a great poem, full of happiness and it is so heartfelt. But don't you think its a little too soon I mean we don't even know each other but I guess I'll marry you.....sorry I just had to do that....I know my jokes suck. Anyways good job and keep on writing.

You go boy!

Andrea

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9 posted 2003-02-04 07:48 PM


Man, that was awesome.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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10 posted 2003-02-04 08:07 PM


Noah, this is so pretty. You knew I'd love it, didn't you?
The graphics look just like a wedding invitation.
One day, I'm gonna learn how to do those pictures........

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2003-02-04 08:36 PM


Noah - what can I say that I haven't already said about your writings. This is just, well just, I mean just touching...

BC

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12 posted 2003-02-04 09:13 PM


enjoy your read
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13 posted 2003-02-04 09:35 PM


Awwww... how special, how sweet... how romantic, how full of the most delicious love.  How dreeeeamy!  ((insert giggle and swoon here))  Sorry, but my heart very much belongs to another! Can we just be friends?

HA HA HA!  Really- a sweet and lovely write.
THANK YOU for sharing!!!

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14 posted 2003-02-04 09:37 PM


*sniff sniff sob sob* I hope that I can find someone who is half as sweet as you
regards2you
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15 posted 2003-02-05 01:41 AM




~Precious Noah!~


Oh, by the way, so is the poem!


Smiling here, Hugs, Pat

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16 posted 2003-02-05 02:32 AM


oh goodness Noah,,, you have me in tears...what a stunning write!
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