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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-02-05 03:25 AM


shielding
wailing
throbbing
insane

contour
abiding
clame
to shame

fake a threat
tease the mess
aching
flailing
burning

nothing left
nothing fresh
somehow life
someone hurt
hope he burns
flames as bright as
what ive learned

shielding
wielding
insane
believing

nothing but nothings left



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Dr Pepper Freak
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since 2003-01-30
Posts 72
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1 posted 2003-02-05 07:18 AM


You write how you feel and you write well.  I could feel music behind this piece.  Great job!

It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne

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